WRITING SAT: ADDING, REVISING, DELETING

Đầu tiên hãy làm quen cấu trúc đề:

At this point, the writer is considering adding/deleting the following sentence.

[Question Sentence Here] 

Should the writer make this addition/deletion here?

A. Yes, because…

B. Yes, because…

C. No, because…

D. No, because…

Bây giờ hãy bắt tay vào cách làm

  • Reread the paragraph

  • Briefly restate the topic in your own words

  • Check each answer choice against the topic

1.Hãy đọc tiêu đề để hiểu passage nói về cái gì.

2.Câu hỏi đòi hỏi bạn phải hiểu cả bài hoặc một đoạn, đừng tốn thời gian đọc lại cả bài vì thời gian là vàng bạc, bạn chỉ có 35 phút để hoàn thành thử thách 44 câu của mình. Thay vào đó hãy nắm ý chính ngay từ đầu để xem câu hỏi có liên quan đến chủ đề không.

3.Hãy loại bỏ trước 2 đáp an YES/NO sau đó hãy đưa ra lời giải thích của chính mình trước khi xem câu trả lời, điều này sẽ giúp bạn phán đoán đúng hơn và không bị phân tâm.

Example

Transportation planners work closely with a number of community stakeholders, such as government officials and other interested organizations and individuals. Next, representatives from the local public health department might provide input in designing a network of trails and sidewalks to encourage people to walk more. (8)According to the American Heart Association, walking provides numerous benefits related to health and well-being. Members of the Chamber of Commerce might share suggestions about designing transportation and parking facilities to support local businesses.

The writer is considering deleting the highlighted sentence. Should the sentence be kept or deleted?

  • (Choice A)Kept, because it provides supporting evidence about the benefits of walking.
  • (Choice B)Kept, because it provides an additional example of a community stakeholder with whom transportation planners work.
  • (Choice C)Deleted, because it blurs the paragraph’s focus on the community stakeholders with whom transportation planners work.
  • (Choice D)Deleted, because it doesn’t provide specific examples of what the numerous benefits of walking are.

HÃY LÀM THEO CÁC BƯỚC

1) Look to the title The title of this passage tells us it’s about the work that transportation planners do.

2) What is the paragraph doing and what is each sentence doing? The topic sentence of the paragraph restates the main idea, and introduces the idea that planners work with folks in the community. Sentence 2 has a problem with it – the “Next” is weird because nothing happened “first” before it – but it is providing a supporting example of the collaboration mentioned in Sentence 1. Sentence 3 is about the benefits of walking. Sentence 4 talks about another form of private-public partnership.

3) What is the sentence doing? It’s talking about how walking is healthy.

4) Is that relevant or does it blur the focus of the paragraph? It’s interesting, but it’s kind of a random detail.The answer is C. It should be deleted because the sentence presents extra info that is unnecessary and disrupts the flow of the paragraph, which is a series of sentences providing examples of the kinds of partnership mentioned in the topic sentence.

Nguồn: Khan Academy, Magoosh

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